Monday, 8 June 2015

THE SILLY GIRAFFE STORY

THE SILLY GIRAFFE STORY

“Ah!’’ “A dog is chasing me!” I wonder where a safe place is… wait there’s only a tree here?  I have to go. Oh no, I better run. Come on, there’s two dogs almost near me. The tree is near me too! Ah! I have to go very fast now before they get me. Bing, I have an idea! My tail is long and it could help me to get up the tree. Almost got it… missed. One more try got it! Finally I was up the tree and safe.  

Written by Jesse

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jesse. I like your story because you have lots of punctuation and detail.

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